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PostSubject: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 00:22

ini journal gue.
hmm.. sebelum baca tulisan2 gue,
gue ingetin dulu.
ga semua yg lu baca itu bener
ga semua yg lu baca, bisa lu ngerti.

kalau ada isinya yang membingungkan,
well... jangan minta gue jelasin.

why? rahasia alam...
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 00:23

From a Dream before Christmast Eve..


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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 00:29

Malam Natal di warung kopi Frank

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 01:42

wew, perna baca nih, n familier bgt di mata eke..
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100 cerpen natal??
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 02:41

wakakkakaka

wogh.. ga nyangka ada yg baca cerpen itu^^
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 28 Dec 2008, 19:52

baca koq.. beberapa.. blush
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:17

haha.. baca punya siapa aja ccnya?
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:18

Malaikat

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:19

Aku dan Keluarga

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:20

Mainan
retitled : Tanggung Jawab


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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:24

Ninja

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:28

Rindu ... Tangis di malam Natal

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:33

Patah Hati

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:36

Selembar Kertas Usang

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:37

Tetangga

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:46

Negeri Dongeng

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jujur aja, gue anggep ini cerita gagal.
waktu gue bikin cerita ini, ada satu kalimat yang terus terngiang2 dalam kepala gue.

pokoknya dalam cerita itu, harus ada yang bilang begini

"bagaimana caranya agar aku bisa menunjukkan padamu, bahwa negeri dongeng itu sungguh ada?"


dan baru kemaren waktu gue jalan di gang sepi, gue nemuin cerita itu harusnya seperti apa. barangkali kapan2 gue tulis ceritanya. sekalipun ga yakin bakal ada yang minat baca cerita gue hehe.. ^^a
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:48

Reuni

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:51

Pulang

Retitled : Harapan


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tadinya cerita ini buat tema "pulang"
tapi terus beda beberapa detik/menit doang, keduluan Inugami. jadi gue ganti judul "perang"
ga taunya udah ada yg judulnya perang buatan stradivarius.
pengen nyerah, tapi udah cape2 bikin ceritanya, ga rela dah.
akhirnya untung "harapan" yang dibikin Eve dihapus Shalala. jadi gue ambil aja judulnya harapan.
untung dihapus... kalau ngga, entah semakin ngawur apa ngga judul tema dengan isi karangannya.
tapi intinya, gue puas banget sama cerita ini.
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:53

Mama

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just 4 my mama.
waktu bikin ini, cuman membayangkan mama saya saja.

jadi inget jaman2 awal morum, thread mama...
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 04:59

Piala


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kalau karya ini yang menang, saya tadinya berjanji bakal terus setia pada One Piece. haha.
kalau anda perhatikan, karya ini satu tema dengan Movie One Piece yang pertama.

difilm tersebut, Odachi membandingkan, penting mana antara emas dan makanan.
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 05:00

Banjir

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gue suka aja ngeliatin orang2 kecil terserang panik.
wakakakkakak

tapi tentunya, ga sampe mereka kehilangan nyawa lah. kasian
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Wed 31 Dec 2008, 05:09

and... i guess... this is my best shot!



Radio
Winner of the best Story


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ini sudah dipermak, maksudnya disempurnakan. kalau mau liat versi
aslinya, kyny masi ada di web aslinya. cerita yg ini dari
www.kemudian.com


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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Fri 02 Jan 2009, 18:33

aku ga tau baca punya sapa aja. cm 3 halaman pertama ato brapa halaman pertama gt..

banyak cerita yang tuoching c, jadi enak bacanya..
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Mon 05 Jan 2009, 13:42

oh.. semoga cerita gwa termasuk bagus.. hehe..
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of the Damned   Sun 25 Jan 2009, 11:41

crita"nye sekar bgus koq..
apalage yg mnang 100 cerpen itu..
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